Post by puccais on Apr 8, 2008 0:04:02 GMT 1
Yay this is a poem I wrote so loooooong ago... when I was that little child that used to hate a guy who didn't notice me... but I think that's over. However, I like it too much and I hope you enjoy it, comments and critics are accepted. ;D (it's kinda long! and has some ort mistakes)
why?
why if i know i love you,
i will never have u?
would it be because of our differences?
why when i go up...
you go down?
and why when i cry...
you laugh?
why? i ask once and again,
why you're so lovely though
you make me wanna hate you?
and when it happens,
you say "sorry..."
and even though i forgive you,
u make the same mistake again,
would i really be
able to forgive you again?
and when you laugh..
why don't you laugh with me,
but of me?
why when this love grows up to you,
yours reduces to me?
well, yes,
i would like to say i do hate you,
though i know deep inside that i will always love you.
That i will never be able
to say what i feel,
just because you don't feel like i do...
i know you don't love me,
from the beginning,
but you made me believe about magic,
about this illusion!
and it just hurts so deep.
how could i avert about loving you?
so hateful the way you are,
so worthless...
how could i fell so low?
so low till loving you?
why whenever i give u a hand
you take it,
but never give it back
when i need it?
years go through so slowly,
why you don't have feel anything about this love?
or it's just you're rejecting it?
roses, violets and thousand of flowers
will sprout in spring,
and you're my spring..
and i can't reject it,
i'll cry,
this tears of hate,
can irritate anyone,
why?
why sould i die for u?
so full of hate..
so full of you..
waiting for some day
maybe already dead,
you could love me the way,
you never did...
why?
why if i know i love you,
i will never have u?
would it be because of our differences?
why when i go up...
you go down?
and why when i cry...
you laugh?
why? i ask once and again,
why you're so lovely though
you make me wanna hate you?
and when it happens,
you say "sorry..."
and even though i forgive you,
u make the same mistake again,
would i really be
able to forgive you again?
and when you laugh..
why don't you laugh with me,
but of me?
why when this love grows up to you,
yours reduces to me?
well, yes,
i would like to say i do hate you,
though i know deep inside that i will always love you.
That i will never be able
to say what i feel,
just because you don't feel like i do...
i know you don't love me,
from the beginning,
but you made me believe about magic,
about this illusion!
and it just hurts so deep.
how could i avert about loving you?
so hateful the way you are,
so worthless...
how could i fell so low?
so low till loving you?
why whenever i give u a hand
you take it,
but never give it back
when i need it?
years go through so slowly,
why you don't have feel anything about this love?
or it's just you're rejecting it?
roses, violets and thousand of flowers
will sprout in spring,
and you're my spring..
and i can't reject it,
i'll cry,
this tears of hate,
can irritate anyone,
why?
why sould i die for u?
so full of hate..
so full of you..
waiting for some day
maybe already dead,
you could love me the way,
you never did...
